Poem b4 I have to "edit" it for school

This is a poem that I wrote about color guard and b4 I have to relate it to economics I wanted to show you the work I am actually proud of...when it's done I won't be as proud.

Beauty From Pain
By: Julia Perona
The pressure is on,
My hands on the
Flagpole are Sliding due to
The sticky sweat.
The other color guards
Look at my guard
With disgust.
I look around,
The many different
Colored flags
Make me dizzy.

We worked really, really
Hard to make it
To the top,
And we won’t
Back down now.
We’re here to win,
That’s the reason
For our long suffering
Hours, to see
Beauty from pain.

Practicing is not
The only thing that
Makes perfect.
There are other details
To work out.
What will the uniforms be,
Which flags should we use,
What song will we perform to?
The most important
Detail is:
How much effort
Is exerted throughout
The whole performance?
We will win, when we all
Choose effort of
One hundred-ten percent.

Now we make our way
To the field to
Show off our
Beauty from pain
To the world.
And when we do
We will see Victory.